Below each draft there is an explanation of its positives and negatives:
1st:
Pros:
- Text looks very clear, uses same font as film effects and titles.
- Background links to the location, gives a clue.
- Characters are engaged in the mobile phone, linked with the storyline.
- No Review.
- Pinlight effect may not be appropriate.
- Pink text with roles eg editor may not be fully visible.
Pros:
- Text is much more visible.
- Pinlight effect may not be appropriate.
- Text may be too small.
Pros:
- Text is visible.
- More credits are better as shows more external involvement.
- Characters look a bit unusual standing fully in the centre.
- Pink glow is not appropriate.
Pros:
- Characters position is much better.
- Text is much more visible.
- Clouds link well with other background image.
- Clouds do seam to heavy and dark- not connoting happiness or love. Seem to angry?
Pros:
- Characters position is much better.
- Faded clouds work well.
- Text size is much better and fitting with normal trends of movie posters.
- Credits are smaller which are more typical.
- Main parts of text are very visible and catch your eye.
- Text matches with film font/house style.
- Still no film review? Waiting from other ancillary text...
FINAL POSTER:
Improvements Made:
- Characters position.
- Faded clouds. Clouds link with background image but also 'dreamlike' quote and film plot.
- Larger text size and fitting with normal trends of movie posters.
- More typical smaller credits.
- Main parts of text are visible and eye catching.
- Text matches with film font/house style.
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