1st Rough Cut

This is my first rough cut for my final idea. It shows the editing and music in going to use for my New York footage and footage of Demi and Harry.

Still to do:
I need to add the text effects which is edited on using adobe premier pro or flash. This will be the onscreen text messages being sent between the two main characters.
Also I need to film the last scene in Norwich Airport. (this is being filmed on the 13/10/14).
Finally, I'm going to add the first scene, which I'm undecided on what to include, I'm not sure if I will just film the character leaving or I must include the parcel including his prize letter.